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Fiction Saturday 2! Jackson Malone part 1

Well friends I am back with Fiction Saturday volume 2!!!  This is a noir style piece that I did a while ago.  Looks like 6 episodes of this one!  Thanks for reading!

Most people call me Jack.  Jackson is just too long, unless it’s Jackson Malone.  That rolls off the tongue quite nicely.  That’s me.  Jackson Malone.  Private Eye.  And I am on a case.  The case is simple.  Murder.

The brother of the victim had come to me for justice.  The police wouldn’t help much.  Their case was open and shut.  One homeless derelict beats another to death over a blanket or some other trinket.  Happens all the time in the city.  Case closed.  Until Rob Moran came into my ramshackle office that Thursday.

“Mr. Moran.  It’s nice to meet you. I’m Jackson Malone.  How can I help you today?” I asked this to a short man in a cheap suit as he entered my office for his appointment.  “Fine.  Fine.” He nervously replied.  “I need to, well, kind of, hire a, um, well, a, um, detective.”   “Well you’ve come to the right place.” I assured him.  “Would you like some coffee or something?”  “Than, than, thanks.” He stammered.  “But do you have anything stronger?”

“Sure, “I said “But it’s only 10 in the morning.”  “That’s ok.” He blurted out.  “I just need it.”  I got the bottle of whiskey from my desk drawer, a glass from the shelf behind me, and poured a couple of ounces into it.  He drank greedily.  I tilted the bottle to offer more but he shook his head.  “Thanks.  I needed that.”  “Well Mr. Moran,” I started again, “What can I do for you?”   “Well, I need help.” He said.  “I want you to find out who killed my brother, Nelson Moran.”

“Woah.” I said,  “This case has been all over the news.  The police have already closed it.  I may not find anything.”   “That is alright.” He replied.  “I just want you to look and try.  I need to know what happened.”   “Fine.” I said, “I will do what I can.”  “Great.  I appreciate it.”  He said as he pushed a retainer check for $500 across the battered wood surface of my desk.  That was more money than I had seen for a good 2 or 3 months.  I took the case.

“I’ll start tomorrow.  Where did he live?”  “That’s the thing,” he started.  “He was kind of homeless.  I do know that he had talked about shacking up in a warehouse on 1st and 32nd but I heard that place burned down about a week ago.  I can’t be much more specific than that.  He wouldn’t come live with me.”  “Alright.”  I said.  “Tomorrow, I will go down there and see what I can dig up.”  “Please do I really want to find out what happened.  My psychiatrist says it is “Closure”  I hope it will help.”  “I hope so too.” I said.  We stood, shook hands, and he left me to my thoughts and the $500 retainer on my desk

The next day was almost dismal, the weather trying to decide if it was sunny or going to rain.  I was in good spirits though.  I had some cash and a job to do.  I actually got up early to begin.

Rob had told me that his brother was homeless, which didn’t help hardly at all, but I decided to check out the warehouse down on 32nd street.  I walked the dozen blocks to the place and stood in front, just looking for anything that may be helpful.

The warehouse had been condemned and boarded up after the fire but it looked like a good place to find homeless people who may know something in exchange for five bucks or so.  I threw my half -burned cigarette to the ground and crushed it out with my shoe, preparing myself for anything.  I walked towards the alley that ran beside the building, hoping that a side door had been jimmied open and allowed ingress to the building.  There was.

The smell of smoke and burned paper were still strong as I approached the warehouse even though the fire had been out for over 3 months according to Alan Rich, my editor friend at the Times.  He had told me that the warehouse was a storage facility for sensitive documents that the police were holding.  The theory was that the fire was a cover up.  Of course nothing could be proven so here sat the empty warehouse.

As I got to the entrance to the alleyway and ducked the yellow crime scene tape, the scents of feces and urine joined the smoke.  Rotting garbage made its appearance, further assaulting my nose as I entered.  The sun was high over head, if filtered by high clouds, and it was easy to see the stained concrete and the graffiti on the walls; as well as the door to the warehouse, jimmied open.  It was on my right about thirty yards ahead of me.

Join us next week for part 2 of Fiction Saturday!  Jackson Malone.

Thanks for reading!

-Justin

Fiction Saturday 2! Jackson Malone part 2

If you haven’t read part 1 yet, this will make next to no sense.

When we left our story last time:

As I got to the entrance to the alleyway and ducked the yellow crime scene tape, the scents of feces and urine joined the smoke.  Rotting garbage made its appearance, further assaulting my nose as I entered.  The sun was high over head, if filtered by high clouds, and it was easy to see the stained concrete and the graffiti on the walls; as well as the door to the warehouse, jimmied open.  It was on my right about thirty yards ahead of me.

And now to today’s installment:

I started towards the door,  hearing only the sounds of traffic and my shoe leather scraping on the worn concrete.  As I passed the dumpster something stirred loudly.  I instinctively spun, my .38 finding its way into my hand as I crouched and aimed at the sound.

It was only a cat.  It went running away from me down the alley.  I breathed as deeply as I dared in the fetid air and stood, keeping the .38 low but in my hand.  I did not want any more surprises.

I reached the door without further incident and peered into the gloom through the partially open door.  I could see nothing.  I backed against the wall next to the door, held my .38 at the ready and pushed it open.

Following a rush of smoke scented air, nothing moved.  I turned and entered the building slowly, leading with my pistol, ready for any movement or confrontation.  As I walked further into the building the gloom increased until I could hardly see.

I took out my lighter and spun the wheel, igniting the familiar yellow glow.  The flame’s light barely pierced the gloom, but it was enough to keep me from walking into fallen roof beams and from stepping into piles of burned refuse.

The smell of humans, unwashed and uncaring was everywhere.  Sweat and the reek of stale urine were nearly overpowering, if tempered by the sooty smell of smoke. There was no one here now that I could see, but the night must have seen the place filled.  It was still dry under the partial roof.   I walked further into the building looking for some clue relating to the late Nelson Moran.

My lighter was getting hot and I extinguished it, wishing I had brought the flashlight from my car.  As my eyes adjusted to the gloom I began to make out shapes, neatly arranged on the floor.  These must have been where people slept.  There were piles of cardboard and newspaper, orderly and arranged in precise rectangles, each to his own space.  This looked to be pretty well organized.

I walked over to a window that was covered by a piece of dirty canvas and peered out a small tear.  I only saw the empty street.

“What the hell are you doin’ here?”  A voice said from behind me.  “You don’t belong here.”   I spun around, my .38 still at the ready, and looked for the source of the voice.  I said to the darkness, “I’m looking for Nelson Moran.”

“He ain’t here.  He’s dead across the street.  And you gonna be the same.”  I heard the tell-tale snap of a semiautomatic pistol being cocked and dove to the floor as the first shot exploded into the darkness.

I rolled and tried to gauge the direction of the shooter.  Another shot rang out.  This time the muzzle flash ruined my night vision, but gave away his position.  He fired again.  I rolled to my left, steadied, and squeezed the trigger on my .38.  A scream followed by a thump answered the bark of my pistol.  I stood and struck my lighter again.

Feeble light filled the space around me as I picked my way towards the fallen man.  I thought he must be dead, but I held my gun ready knowing that he could just be playing possum.  As I neared him, I knew he wasn’t playing.  Sirens started and were getting louder as I rolled the body over with the toe of my shoe.

I had hit him cleanly in the chest.  He was dead.  Shell casings all around him and a statement from me would establish self-defense.  I wasn’t however, on the best terms with the police chief right now.  I didn’t need another incident like the one that took my badge.

The memory came back unbidden and nothing else mattered at the moment.  There I was, dazed, waking up from being knocked out.  I looked around trying to get my bearings.  My gun and nightstick were gone.  Probably taken by the guys who assaulted me.  I stood, controlling a wave of nausea and turned to find a body at my feet.

I would have thought him asleep if not for the pool of blood he was lying in.  I turned him over and saw the ragged holes in his chest.  Placed just the way they had taught us to shoot at the Academy.  I vaguely remembered someone rushing me with a knife.  Had I shot him?  I may have.

I smelled my fingers.  Cordite.  The smell of burnt gunpowder was in the air. I had recently fired my gun that was now missing.  I looked down at my clothes.  My uniform was unrecognizable.  It was torn to shreds and all emblems had been ripped off.  No one could ever know me as a cop.

Tune in next week for part 3 of Jackson Malone!

Fiction Saturday 2! Jackson Malone part 3

If you haven’t read part 1 yet,

Or even Part 2, this will make next to no sense.

When we left our Story last time:

… I would have thought him asleep if not for the pool of blood he was lying in.  I turned him over and saw the ragged holes in his chest.  Placed just the way they had taught us to shoot at the Academy.  I vaguely remembered someone rushing me with a knife.  Had I shot him?  I may have.

I smelled my fingers.  Cordite.  The smell of burnt gunpowder was in the air. I had recently fired my gun that was now missing.  I looked down at my clothes.  My uniform was unrecognizable.  It was torn to shreds and all emblems had been ripped off.  No one could ever know me as a cop.

And we join the story, already in progress…

I could hear sirens wailing in the distance and getting closer.  I had to decide what to do quickly.  I could be linked to the case even if I ran; if it had been my gun that had shot him.  All of the firearms in the department had ballistics records on them.  They were sure to check.  Even if I found all of the bullets they would suspect a cop.  They knew how to cover their track.  I thought my best course of action would be to cry self defense and stay and wait for my brothers in blue to come.  I sat down hard on the cement next to the body.

I never was exonerated.  There was no proof of anything but the fact my gun had killed the man.  I couldn’t prove self-defense.  I couldn’t prove anything.  I was fired immediately. Kicked off of the force never to return.  At least I didn’t have to go to jail.  I know what they do to cops in jail.

I snapped out of my revelry and back to the present.  I got moving fast.  I flipped the cap on my lighter dropping it into my pocket, and moved quickly toward the glowing outline of the door, exiting back into the overcast sunshine of the alley.

My gun disappeared back into it’s holster as I exited the alley, turned right and walked quickly down the street towards a diner I had passed earlier.  The sirens had almost arrived at the warehouse as I ducked inside “Vic’s”.

I sat at the counter and ordered coffee trying to pick up something, some clue from the warehouse.  Then it hit me.  The guy I had shot said “He dead across the street.” Before he began blasting away.  Why was that so important?  I finished my coffee and left Vic’s, walking fast to avoid the police that were milling around the warehouse.

My next stop was the library.  I went directly to the newspaper archives and dug around looking for the news account of the murder.  Across the street was the key.  I knew it.  I perused articles about the murder until I found it.  Moran was not killed in the fire, but in the house across the street from the warehouse.  I headed there next.

As I arrived I saw that a small brick house that sat on a large lot directly across the street from the warehouse.  This was the murder scene, the place where Nelson Moran was killed.  Why had I not thought of that before?  I must have heard it somewhere.

The house was still covered in yellow crime scene tape and discarded coffee cups when I started up the front walk.  I  noted a rusting realty sign that hung from a bent metal stand.  As I approached the porch and ducked the crime scene tape, a young officer emerged from the front door.  “Area’s off limits buddy.  Move along.”  He told me in a bored voice.  He didn’t want to be here either.

“Relax.” I said as I displayed my Private Investigators badge.  “I’m here working for the family.  I just want to look around.”  “I dunno.  I’m not supposed to let anyone in here without permission.  We are working on this case.”  “I understand, but the family has asked me to take a look around.  C’mon I know you are bored.  We can look together.  I won’t even touch anything.”  “Okay, “ he finally relented, “Just for a few minutes.”  “That’s all I’ll need.” I told him as I mounted the steps and followed him inside.

I crossed the threshold and motioned for the officer to be quiet.  I needed to think, to hear what the house could tell me.  This house had been unoccupied but partially furnished by the Realtor who was trying to sell the house.  I could hear the canned laughter of a television program playing in another room, where the officer must have been “watching” the place.

I entered a small hallway with worn linoleum on the floor and noticed the smell.  It was the same stench of unwashed bodies that permeated the warehouse across the street.  The homeless must have lived here also.  That is probably why Nelson Moran was here that unfortunate night.

I turned left and entered a living room that was dominated by a huge bay window.  This window took up most of the north wall.  I walked over to the window and looked out.  This was a perfect view of the warehouse across the street.  An arsonist may have liked this view as his handiwork burned.  But I was not on that case.  This room had been lived in, the carpet worn thin in several spots, but it was relatively clean.  Not exactly brimming over with clues.

If I didn’t find something, this case would be over.

Join us again next week for the next chapter of Jackson Malone!

And if you liked this story you may enjoy Death With A Vengeance, my previous Fiction Saturday story, available here as an e-book!Thanks for reading, see you next week

-Justin

What old radio has taught me about writing and imagination

Do you like old radio?  I do.  I love to listen to what was entertainment before Philo T. Farnsworth turned on his brain and invented the television.

I was letting my computer randomize songs and one of these old shows came on.  It happened to be “The Fat Man” from 1946.  This character was one of Daishell Hammett’s creations.  If you don’t know, Daishell Hammett pretty much created the hard boiled detective noir genre.  The Maltese Falcon, and Sam Spade were his, as were many other entries in Black Mask Magazine and several old radio shows.  If you like Dead Med Don’t Wear Plaid, think Daishell Hammett.

Listening to this show, I realized how far entertainment has come whether for good or bad.  In today’s world, there is so much visual and so many things that can be done with special effects that the writing does not have to be very descriptive in relation to old radio.  A director can add or subtract elements to fit what he wants to show and our imagination doesn’t need to work.

In the “old” days, with radio everything had to be presented by the actors, for the imaginations of the masses.  “Theater of the Mind” was bandied about and it truly was.  Writers had to put enough information into their stories that the dialogue and some primitive sound effects could immerse a listener into the world of the writers imagination.

I have come to realize that this most basic lesson of writing is still one of the most important.  Paint the word picture, there are no special effects for books.  Maybe in the future the Kindle will have smells and sounds come out of it but not today.   It is my job as a writer to make you the reader see inside my head.

I have had some difficulty learning this in the past.  I can see my world why can’t you?  Of course the pirates are coming up the hill on the road from the town.  Oh did I forget to mention the town or the hill in the first draft?  Umm, Yea.   I have learned much from the old radio writers about descriptions and dialogue that paints a scene.

If you need something different to listen to, head to the library and look for the books on cd section.  They have a section in there with old radio shows.  Start with War of the Worlds and get into The Shadow, The Fat Man and anything with Arch Obler like Lights Out.  Suspense is a great one too, many starring Vincent Price.

Good luck getting back to the classics

Justin

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